城市之后的远迎

"一座城池,一条河"

湖南桂花树:最后一排

2019年10月22日 23:29

【<】【p】【>】【好】【玩】【的】【作】【文】【课】【又】【到】【了】【。】【贾】【老】【师】【说】【今】【天】【玩】【的】【游】【戏】【是】【猜】【硬】【币】【。】【我】【们】【一】【听】【到】【这】【个】【游】【戏】【的】【名】【字】【都】【兴】【奋】【起】【来】【,】【有】【的】【说】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【怎】【么】【玩】【?】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【有】【的】【说】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【难】【不】【难】【?】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【还】【有】【的】【说】【:】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【真】【难】【猜】【!】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【而】【我】【却】【坐】【在】【位】【置】【上】【一】【动】【不】【动】【,】【心】【里】【想】【:】【太】【难】【了】【吧】【。】【紧】【张】【得】【要】【命】【。】【我】【看】【见】【王】【雅】【婷】【目】【瞪】【口】【呆】【,】【还】【看】【见】【张】【乐】【乐】【的】【眼】【睛】【大】【得】【像】【&】【l】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【二】【筒】【&】【r】【d】【q】【u】【o】【;】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【人】【生】【的】【旅】【途】【中】【,】【我】【们】【经】【常】【会】【遇】【到】【荆】【棘】【地】【,】【当】【我】【遇】【到】【它】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【总】【会】【在】【心】【里】【大】【声】【呐】【喊】【:】【我】【并】【不】【差】【,】【我】【一】【定】【会】【越】【过】【去】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【记】【得】【那】【次】【我】【和】【同】【学】【去】【爬】【山】【,】【那】【山】【很】【高】【,】【而】【且】【有】【很】【多】【地】【方】【都】【很】【不】【好】【走】【。】【我】【们】【开】【始】【爬】【山】【比】【赛】【,】【有】【几】【个】【同】【学】【一】【开】【始】【就】【快】【速】【地】【爬】【到】【了】【最】【前】【面】【,】【把】【我】【们】【远】【远】【地】【甩】【在】【了】【后】【面】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【七】【月】【骄】【阳】【似】【火】【,】【火】【辣】【辣】【的】【太】【阳】【炙】【烤】【着】【大】【地】【,】【脚】【下】【的】【地】【面】【也】【冒】【着】【热】【气】【。】【在】【这】【样】【热】【的】【环】【境】【中】【,】【我】【还】【没】【爬】【到】【半】【山】【腰】【就】【气】【喘】【吁】【吁】【了】【。】【抬】【头】【望】【望】【他】【们】【,】【我】【已】【经】【被】【落】【得】【好】【远】【了】【。】【我】【有】【气】【无】【力】【地】【一】【步】【一】【步】【地】【走】【着】【,】【脚】【下】【一】【不】【留】【神】【,】【一】【下】【就】【重】【重】【地】【摔】【在】【地】【上】【。】【真】【是】【倒】【霉】【,】【膝】【盖】【破】【了】【。】【我】【的】【脑】【子】【里】【出】【现】【了】【一】【个】【念】【头】【:】【放】【弃】【吧】【。】【我】【再】【一】【次】【看】【了】【看】【前】【面】【,】【准】【备】【放】【弃】【。】【可】【转】【念】【一】【想】【,】【不】【就】【是】【被】【他】【们】【落】【得】【远】【点】【吗】【?】【不】【就】【是】【把】【膝】【盖】【弄】【破】【了】【吗】【?】【这】【点】【困】【难】【休】【想】【让】【我】【放】【弃】【,】【我】【并】【不】【差】【,】【我】【一】【定】【会】【超】【过】【他】【们】【的】【!】【我】【在】【心】【里】【暗】【下】【决】【心】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【站】【了】【起】【来】【,】【忍】【着】【疼】【痛】【快】【速】【地】【追】【赶】【。】【尽】【管】【那】【太】【阳】【的】【威】【力】【不】【减】【,】【尽】【管】【我】【汗】【流】【不】【止】【,】【尽】【管】【那】【一】【股】【股】【的】【汗】【水】【流】【进】【伤】【口】【,】【钻】【心】【地】【疼】【…】【…】【我】【的】【步】【伐】【从】【未】【减】【慢】【,】【还】【逐】【渐】【地】【加】【快】【。】【这】【样】【,】【我】【超】【过】【了】【一】【个】【、】【两】【个】【、】【三】【个】【同】【学】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【开】【始】【浑】【身】【无】【力】【,】【那】【该】【死】【的】【伤】【口】【疼】【得】【更】【厉】【害】【了】【。】【“】【休】【息】【一】【下】【吧】【,】【太】【累】【了】【。】【”】【懒】【惰】【的】【我】【在】【脑】【海】【里】【苦】【苦】【地】【哀】【求】【着】【。】【“】【不】【行】【,】【坚】【持】【,】【坚】【持】【,】【前】【面】【还】【有】【四】【个】【同】【学】【呢】【,】【一】【定】【要】【把】【他】【们】【超】【过】【去】【。】【”】【另】【一】【个】【我】【坚】【决】【地】【说】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【终】【我】【选】【择】【了】【坚】【持】【,】【绝】【不】【能】【放】【弃】【。】【我】【咬】【紧】【牙】【关】【,】【心】【里】【一】【遍】【一】【遍】【地】【默】【念】【着】【:】【我】【不】【累】【,】【我】【不】【疼】【。】【我】【并】【不】【差】【,】【一】【定】【能】【超】【过】【他】【们】【,】【坚】【持】【到】【最】【后】【!】【快】【到】【山】【顶】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【什】【么】【都】【不】【顾】【了】【,】【飞】【快】【地】【向】【山】【顶】【跑】【了】【过】【去】【,】【我】【把】【他】【们】【全】【超】【了】【过】【去】【。】【当】【我】【到】【达】【山】【顶】【的】【那】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【的】【眼】【泪】【一】【下】【子】【就】【涌】【了】【出】【来】【。】【我】【不】【知】【那】【是】【获】【得】【成】【功】【之】【后】【幸】【福】【的】【泪】【,】【还】【是】【因】【疼】【痛】【流】【下】【的】【泪】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【泪】【水】【的】【模】【糊】【中】【,】【我】【大】【声】【呐】【喊】【:】【“】【我】【并】【不】【差】【,】【我】【终】【于】【成】【功】【了】【!】【”】【那】【声】【音】【在】【山】【谷】【中】【回】【荡】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【相】【信】【自】【己】【,】【会】【使】【你】【越】【过】【荆】【棘】【,】【超】【过】【鸿】【沟】【,】【它】【像】【一】【只】【船】【带】【你】【到】【达】【成】【功】【的】【彼】【岸】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【申】【君】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【 】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【中】【写】【爬】【山】【过】【程】【,】【为】【什】【么】【写】【得】【逼】【真】【逼】【肖】【,】【“】【字】【立】【纸】【上】【”】【?】【因】【为】【作】【者】【用】【了】【形】【象】【具】【体】【的】【行】【动】【描】【写】【和】【细】【腻】【入】【微】【的】【心】【理】【描】【写】【。】【在】【半】【山】【腰】【,】【“】【我】【”】【摔】【倒】【了】【,】【摔】【破】【了】【膝】【盖】【,】【于】【是】【想】【放】【弃】【,】【这】【是】【一】【抑】【,】【“】【转】【念】【一】【想】【”】【,】【“】【这】【点】【困】【难】【休】【想】【让】【我】【放】【弃】【”】【,】【又】【是】【一】【扬】【。】【这】【段】【内】【心】【独】【白】【写】【得】【很】【细】【腻】【。】【不】【畏】【难】【不】【服】【输】【的】【心】【理】【支】【配】【着】【“】【我】【”】【的】【行】【动】【,】【使】【我】【忍】【痛】【坚】【持】【。】【过】【了】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【又】【感】【“】【浑】【身】【无】【力】【”】【,】【文】【中】【采】【用】【内】【心】【自】【省】【技】【法】【,】【写】【两】【个】【“】【我】【”】【在】【内】【心】【里】【打】【架】【,】【一】【个】【要】【休】【息】【,】【一】【个】【要】【坚】【持】【,】【这】【又】【是】【一】【抑】【,】【然】【而】【最】【终】【选】【择】【了】【坚】【持】【,】【并】【登】【上】【山】【顶】【,】【又】【是】【一】【扬】【。】【这】【两】【抑】【两】【扬】【,】【写】【出】【了】【波】【澜】【,】【使】【登】【山】【活】【动】【富】【有】【情】【趣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【点】【评】【老】【师】【:】【甫】【田】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】湖南桂花树【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【试】【题】【导】【入】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【的】【家】【乡】【每】【天】【都】【在】【变】【化】【着】【,】【城】【市】【在】【变】【化】【,】【农】【村】【在】【变】【化】【,】【人】【们】【的】【生】【活】【在】【变】【化】【。】【楼】【房】【越】【来】【越】【多】【,】【房】【屋】【越】【来】【越】【亮】【堂】【,】【道】【路】【越】【来】【越】【宽】【,】【路】【边】【绿】【化】【也】【越】【来】【越】【美】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【们】【在】【追】【求】【物】【质】【生】【活】【的】【同】【时】【,】【对】【精】【神】【生】【活】【也】【有】【了】【新】【的】【追】【求】【。】【衣】【食】【无】【忧】【的】【人】【们】【开】【始】【关】【注】【外】【面】【的】【世】【界】【,】【关】【注】【中】【国】【的】【经】【济】【发】【展】【,】【关】【注】【世】【界】【的】【热】【点】【问】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【留】【心】【身】【边】【的】【这】【种】【变】【化】【了】【吗】【?】【细】【致】【观】【察】【并】【深】【切】【感】【受】【你】【身】【边】【的】【这】【种】【变】【化】【,】【用】【生】【动】【的】【文】【笔】【描】【绘】【你】【的】【所】【察】【所】【思】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【“】【家】【乡】【新】【变】【化】【”】【为】【话】【题】【写】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【文】【体】【不】【限】【,】【题】【目】【自】【拟】【,】【6】【0】【0】【字】【以】【上】【。】【要】【写】【出】【真】【感】【受】【、】【真】【变】【化】【,】【既】【可】【写】【事】【物】【,】【又】【可】【写】【人】【物】【,】【切】【忌】【泛】【泛】【而】【谈】【,】【空】【洞】【乏】【味】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【作】【指】【导】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【描】【写】【家】【乡】【的】【新】【变】【化】【,】【必】【须】【细】【致】【观】【察】【并】【深】【切】【感】【受】【这】【种】【变】【化】【:】【感】【受】【社】【会】【现】【象】【的】【变】【化】【,】【感】【受】【发】【展】【动】【力】【的】【变】【化】【;】【感】【受】【物】【质】【生】【活】【的】【变】【化】【,】【感】【受】【精】【神】【世】【界】【的】【变】【化】【。】【比】【如】【乡】【村】【的】【城】【镇】【化】【,】【农】【业】【的】【现】【代】【化】【,】【手】【机】【的】【普】【及】【化】【,】【衣】【着】【的】【时】【尚】【化】【,】【轿】【车】【的】【家】【庭】【化】【,】【城】【市】【的】【园】【林】【化】【,】【街】【道】【的】【宽】【敞】【化】【,】【建】【筑】【的】【个】【性】【化】【,】【饮】【食】【的】【营】【养】【化】【,】【科】【技】【的】【尖】【端】【化】【,】【精】【神】【的】【多】【彩】【化】【…】【…】【要】【把】【握】【自】【己】【最】【感】【兴】【趣】【的】【一】【点】【,】【积】【累】【感】【受】【和】【灵】【感】【,】【有】【话】【可】【说】【,】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【能】【感】【染】【人】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【变】【化】【,】【就】【要】【注】【重】【写】【今】【昔】【的】【对】【比】【。】【既】【可】【写】【人】【物】【、】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【,】【又】【可】【写】【景】【物】【的】【变】【化】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【描】【写】【家】【乡】【的】【新】【变】【化】【,】【自】【然】【要】【以】【记】【叙】【为】【主】【,】【要】【选】【取】【典】【型】【而】【生】【动】【的】【事】【例】【,】【由】【“】【点】【”】【入】【手】【,】【以】【点】【示】【面】【,】【从】【而】【充】【分】【地】【表】【达】【意】【旨】【。】【比】【如】【写】【人】【,】【要】【写】【出】【人】【物】【精】【神】【世】【界】【的】【变】【化】【;】【写】【事】【物】【,】【要】【写】【出】【事】【物】【变】【化】【的】【过】【程】【,】【要】【注】【重】【事】【例】【的】【细】【节】【化】【、】【故】【事】【化】【、】【生】【动】【化】【,】【切】【忌】【面】【面】【俱】【到】【,】【泛】【泛】【而】【述】【,】【空】【洞】【无】【物】【。】【比】【如】【下】【面】【这】【段】【文】【字】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【来】【到】【了】【家】【乡】【,】【啊】【!】【真】【美】【!】【难】【道】【这】【是】【我】【的】【眼】【睛】【花】【了】【?】【我】【揉】【了】【揉】【眼】【睛】【,】【没】【有】【呀】【?】【本】【来】【以】【前】【那】【坑】【坑】【洼】【洼】【、】【崎】【岖】【不】【平】【的】【小】【路】【,】【现】【在】【已】【变】【成】【一】【条】【平】【平】【坦】【坦】【的】【柏】【油】【路】【,】【路】【两】【旁】【种】【满】【了】【花】【草】【树】【木】【,】【蜜】【蜂】【在】【唱】【歌】【,】【蝴】【蝶】【在】【跳】【舞】【,】【高】【楼】【大】【厦】【拔】【地】【而】【起】【。】【我】【和】【爸】【爸】【来】【到】【叔】【叔】【家】【,】【哇】【,】【叔】【叔】【家】【也】【变】【了】【,】【房】【子】【很】【大】【很】【大】【,】【墙】【壁】【刷】【得】【雪】【白】【雪】【白】【的】【,】【装】【修】【豪】【华】【。】【家】【具】【也】【是】【崭】【新】【的】【,】【刻】【着】【龙】【凤】【图】【案】【。】【他】【们】【再】【也】【不】【用】【灶】【头】【煮】【东】【西】【了】【,】【都】【换】【成】【煤】【气】【炉】【,】【方】【便】【快】【捷】【…】【…】【我】【好】【像】【到】【了】【人】【间】【仙】【境】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【上】【文】【字】【缺】【乏】【深】【切】【的】【感】【受】【,】【蜻】【蜓】【点】【水】【,】【面】【面】【俱】【到】【,】【泛】【泛】【堆】【砌】【,】【且】【有】【一】【些】【说】【大】【话】【、】【喊】【口】【号】【的】【意】【味】【,】【自】【然】【空】【洞】【乏】【味】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【在】【叙】【述】【手】【法】【上】【,】【可】【巧】【用】【倒】【叙】【,】【以】【求】【详】【略】【得】【当】【,】【举】【重】【若】【轻】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【□】【佳】【作】【展】【示】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【家】【有】【电】【视】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【○】【 】【孟】【庆】【杰】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【 】【对】【奶】【奶】【话】【最】【感】【兴】【趣】【的】【是】【妈】【妈】【。】【妈】【妈】【接】【上】【话】【茬】【:】【“】【我】【像】【你】【们】【这】【么】【大】【的】【时】【候】【,】【最】【爱】【看】【电】【影】【了】【。】【”】【“】【你】【到】【哪】【儿】【的】【电】【影】【院】【去】【看】【啊】【?】【”】【妹】【妹】【好】【奇】【地】【问】【。】【妈】【妈】【说】【:】【“】【哪】【里】【是】【到】【什】【么】【电】【影】【院】【呐】【。】【那】【时】【候】【公】【社】【里】【的】【电】【影】【队】【一】【年】【到】【每】【个】【村】【放】【几】【次】【电】【影】【。】【电】【影】【队】【来】【本】【村】【呀】【,】【我】【就】【催】【家】【人】【早】【早】【做】【饭】【,】【吃】【饭】【。】【没】【等】【天】【黑】【,】【人】【家】【影】【布】【扯】【起】【来】【,】【我】【就】【搬】【矮】【凳】【抢】【占】【个】【好】【地】【方】【。】【有】【时】【候】【饭】【都】【顾】【不】【上】【吃】【,】【饿】【着】【肚】【子】【看】【完】【电】【影】【再】【回】【家】【吃】【。】【外】【村】【放】【电】【影】【,】【我】【就】【跟】【着】【大】【人】【们】【去】【。】【那】【时】【候】【哇】【,】【看】【电】【影】【可】【是】【新】【鲜】【事】【,】【十】【几】【个】【村】【子】【的】【人】【挤】【成】【黑】【压】【压】【一】【片】【。】【有】【时】【候】【电】【影】【放】【到】【半】【夜】【,】【人】【们】【还】【在】【看】【。】【有】【时】【有】【人】【搞】【恶】【作】【剧】【,】【说】【外】【村】【来】【了】【电】【影】【,】【我】【们】【就】【急】【匆】【匆】【赶】【了】【去】【,】【结】【果】【挨】【了】【骗】【,】【就】【只】【好】【一】【路】【吵】【吵】【嚷】【嚷】【,】【屁】【颠】【屁】【颠】【地】【赶】【回】【来】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【搭】【话】【:】【“】【还】【是】【你】【们】【有】【福】【。】【饭】【来】【张】【口】【,】【衣】【来】【伸】【手】【。】【没】【事】【就】【待】【在】【家】【里】【看】【电】【视】【,】【你】【们】【生】【在】【什】【么】【时】【候】【哇】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【有】【什】【么】【福】【呀】【?】【”】【妹】【妹】【一】【努】【嘴】【,】【“】【人】【家】【都】【是】【二】【十】【五】【寸】【、】【二】【十】【九】【寸】【的】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【,】【咱】【家】【还】【是】【这】【么】【个】【二】【十】【一】【寸】【的】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【你】【这】【个】【小】【妮】【子】【,】【身】【在】【福】【中】【还】【不】【知】【足】【!】【”】【奶】【奶】【脸】【一】【阴】【,】【有】【点】【生】【气】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妹】【妹】【吐】【了】【吐】【舌】【头】【躲】【一】【边】【。】【我】【拉】【着】【奶】【奶】【的】【手】【说】【:】【“】【奶】【奶】【,】【咱】【家】【也】【该】【买】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【,】【大】【彩】【电】【比】【小】【的】【更】【好】【看】【。】【买】【了】【大】【彩】【电】【,】【这】【小】【彩】【电】【就】【归】【你】【自】【己】【,】【光】【让】【你】【看】【戏】【。】【行】【吧】【,】【奶】【奶】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【咱】【家】【是】【该】【买】【大】【彩】【电】【了】【。】【这】【事】【已】【列】【入】【计】【划】【,】【近】【期】【就】【办】【!】【要】【买】【,】【就】【买】【好】【的】【,】【买】【一】【台】【液】【晶】【大】【屏】【的】【,】【而】【且】【连】【电】【脑】【一】【块】【买】【。】【年】【底】【看】【中】【央】【电】【视】【台】【春】【节】【晚】【会】【,】【保】【证】【看】【的】【是】【大】【彩】【电】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【在】【外】【屋】【发】【表】【“】【严】【正】【声】【明】【”】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妹】【妹】【乐】【了】【:】【“】【电】【脑】【归】【我】【!】【”】【爸】【爸】【忙】【说】【:】【“】【是】【为】【了】【你】【和】【你】【姐】【姐】【的】【学】【习】【买】【的】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【一】【听】【笑】【了】【,】【妈】【妈】【笑】【了】【。】【我】【和】【妹】【妹】【也】【笑】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【时】【候】【,】【妹】【妹】【调】【换】【了】【频】【道】【,】【电】【视】【里】【播】【放】【的】【是】【奶】【奶】【最】【爱】【看】【的】【戏】【—】【—】【“】【咿】【呀】【咿】【呀】【咿】【咿】【呀】【呀】【…】【…】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【围】【绕】【家】【庭】【关】【于】【电】【视】【的】【话】【题】【,】【单】【刀】【直】【入】【,】【如】【数】【家】【珍】【,】【曲】【折】【细】【腻】【,】【摇】【曳】【多】【姿】【,】【巧】【忆】【往】【事】【,】【今】【昔】【对】【比】【,】【反】【映】【了】【百】【姓】【生】【活】【水】【平】【的】【不】【断】【提】【高】【,】【折】【射】【了】【时】【代】【的】【巨】【大】【变】【化】【,】【以】【小】【见】【大】【,】【意】【旨】【深】【切】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【通】【篇】【以】【人】【物】【对】【话】【而】【制】【胜】【。】【对】【话】【富】【有】【浓】【郁】【的】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【个】【性】【鲜】【明】【。】【特】【别】【是】【奶】【奶】【的】【话】【,】【别】【有】【情】【趣】【。】【文】【章】【结】【构】【简】【明】【自】【然】【,】【一】【气】【呵】【成】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【心】【练】【笔】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【以】【“】【身】【边】【的】【变】【化】【”】【为】【题】【,】【写】【一】【个】【作】【文】【片】【段】【,】【要】【运】【用】【细】【节】【描】【写】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【法】【点】【拨】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【事】【物】【的】【变】【化】【过】【程】【,】【可】【运】【用】【场】【面】【描】【写】【或】【景】【物】【描】【写】【;】【写】【人】【物】【的】【变】【化】【,】【可】【灵】【活】【运】【用】【语】【言】【描】【写】【和】【行】【动】【描】【写】【等】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【素】【材】【积】【累】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【一】【年】【没】【回】【家】【了】【。】【走】【在】【家】【乡】【熟】【悉】【的】【街】【道】【上】【,】【我】【却】【有】【了】【一】【种】【陌】【生】【感】【。】【不】【少】【人】【家】【新】【盖】【了】【二】【层】【小】【楼】【,】【弄】【不】【清】【到】【底】【是】【谁】【家】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【奶】【奶】【见】【了】【我】【高】【兴】【地】【合】【不】【拢】【嘴】【:】【“】【妮】【子】【,】【我】【让】【你】【饱】【一】【饱】【口】【福】【。】【”】【等】【饭】【菜】【端】【上】【来】【,】【我】【愣】【了】【:】【“】【奶】【奶】【,】【我】【还】【以】【为】【你】【给】【我】【做】【了】【大】【鱼】【大】【肉】【呢】【…】【…】【”】【奶】【奶】【做】【个】【鬼】【脸】【:】【“】【傻】【妮】【子】【,】【这】【年】【头】【大】【鱼】【大】【肉】【都】【吃】【腻】【了】【,】【有】【啥】【好】【吃】【的】【?】【现】【在】【电】【视】【里】【说】【要】【吃】【绿】【色】【,】【吃】【营】【养】【。】【你】【看】【,】【这】【饭】【菜】【你】【不】【愿】【吃】【啊】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【饭】【桌】【上】【摆】【上】【了】【奶】【奶】【亲】【手】【酿】【的】【面】【酱】【,】【还】【有】【大】【葱】【,】【曲】【曲】【菜】【、】【婆】【婆】【丁】【等】【别】【有】【药】【效】【的】【野】【菜】【,】【香】【喷】【喷】【的】【窝】【窝】【头】【。】【外】【加】【一】【大】【盆】【紫】【菜】【鸡】【蛋】【汤】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【于】【是】【埋】【头】【吃】【了】【个】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【。】【心】【里】【直】【感】【叹】【连】【老】【人】【的】【饮】【食】【观】【念】【都】【与】【时】【俱】【进】【了】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【春】【日】【撒】【种】【虽】【胜】【好】【,】【但】【却】【炎】【夏】【美】【胜】【霜】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【秋】【风】【已】【报】【浓】【冬】【日】【,】【唯】【有】【它】【还】【放】【青】【光】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【峭】【壁】【虽】【陡】【难】【平】【直】【,】【青】【竹】【挺】【胸】【站】【山】【冈】【。】【”】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【朋】【友】【,】【这】【就】【是】【翠】【竹】【的】【真】【实】【写】【照】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【家】【的】【吊】【脚】【楼】【下】【有】【一】【片】【很】【大】【的】【竹】【林】【,】【每】【根】【竹】【子】【都】【很】【粗】【壮】【,】【最】【粗】【的】【直】【径】【大】【约】【有】【1】【0】【厘】【米】【左】【右】【,】【最】【高】【的】【有】【七】【八】【米】【呢】【!】【它】【们】【都】【依】【傍】【在】【一】【棵】【老】【槐】【树】【旁】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【清】【晨】【,】【漫】【步】【竹】【林】【 】【,】【和】【风】【习】【习】【,】【竹】【林】【萧】【萧】【,】【林】【子】【里】【静】【极】【了】【,】【就】【连】【小】【鸟】【儿】【扑】【腾】【翅】【膀】【的】【声】【音】【也】【能】【听】【见】【。】【随】【着】【公】【鸡】【报】【晓】【,】【打】【破】【山】【村】【宁】【静】【,】【也】【划】【破】【了】【竹】【林】【的】【安】【静】【,】【林】【间】【顿】【时】【热】【闹】【起】【来】【,】【鸟】【儿】【亮】【开】【歌】【喉】【为】【我】【唱】【歌】【,】【虫】【儿】【们】【为】【我】【翩】【翩】【起】【舞】【,】【露】【珠】【与】【我】【交】【换】【眼】【神】【,】【刹】【那】【间】【,】【我】【便】【进】【入】【了】【一】【个】【美】【妙】【的】【音】【乐】【世】【界】【,】【那】【种】【优】【雅】【的】【旋】【律】【让】【我】【回】【味】【无】【穷】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【久】【,】【乳】【白】【色】【的】【浓】【雾】【慢】【慢】【升】【腾】【开】【来】【,】【笼】【罩】【着】【大】【地】【,】【竹】【林】【也】【浸】【透】【其】【间】【,】【碧】【绿】【的】【竹】【叶】【挂】【满】【露】【珠】【,】【瞧】【!】【多】【美】【,】【它】【们】【集】【天】【地】【之】【精】【华】【,】【揽】【万】【物】【之】【胜】【景】【,】【偶】【尔】【,】【禁】【不】【住】【微】【风】【一】【吹】【,】【从】【叶】【尖】【滴】【落】【到】【你】【的】【脸】【上】【,】【痒】【酥】【酥】【,】【凉】【悠】【悠】【,】【渗】【入】【肌】【骨】【,】【浸】【透】【肺】【腑】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【会】【儿】【,】【云】【开】【雾】【散】【,】【阳】【光】【利】【剑】【一】【般】【穿】【过】【云】【层】【,】【挤】【过】【竹】【梢】【,】【钻】【进】【竹】【林】【里】【,】【使】【铺】【满】【竹】【叶】【的】【地】【面】【变】【得】【斑】【斑】【驳】【驳】【,】【印】【上】【各】【种】【美】【丽】【的】【图】【案】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【大】【风】【是】【这】【里】【的】【主】【宰】【者】【,】【随】【着】【它】【一】【声】【高】【歌】【,】【“】【呼】【—】【—】【呼】【—】【—】【”】【竹】【儿】【们】【、】【小】【草】【们】【、】【大】【树】【们】【,】【一】【切】【的】【一】【切】【,】【禁】【不】【住】【跟】【着】【手】【舞】【足】【蹈】【起】【来】【,】【竹】【林】【发】【出】【天】【籁】【之】【音】【,】【美】【妙】【极】【了】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【中】【午】【,】【茂】【密】【的】【竹】【叶】【将】【林】【子】【封】【闭】【得】【严】【严】【实】【实】【,】【似】【乎】【要】【遮】【住】【蔚】【蓝】【的】【天】【空】【,】【挡】【住】【人】【们】【的】【视】【线】【,】【挡】【住】【酷】【热】【的】【暑】【气】【。】【虽】【然】【如】【此】【苦】【心】【孤】【诣】【,】【雨】【后】【天】【空】【的】【彩】【虹】【却】【要】【来】【挑】【战】【一】【下】【它】【的】【实】【力】【。】【彩】【虹】【跨】【过】【屋】【顶】【、】【跨】【过】【柳】【叶】【、】【跨】【过】【葡】【萄】【的】【卷】【须】【、】【跨】【过】【滴】【水】【的】【草】【尖】【、】【跨】【过】【挂】【满】【雨】【水】【的】【蓓】【蕾】【,】【也】【跨】【过】【茂】【密】【的】【竹】【叶】【,】【来】【到】【竹】【林】【间】【,】【一】【切】【都】【显】【得】【那】【样】【自】【然】【、】【和】【谐】【、】【亲】【切】【、】【轻】【松】【。】【似】【乎】【这】【个】【世】【界】【本】【来】【就】【应】【该】【是】【这】【样】【的】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【幕】【降】【临】【,】【皎】【洁】【的】【月】【光】【穿】【过】【竹】【梢】【,】【银】【白】【色】【的】【竹】【叶】【逐】【渐】【静】【了】【下】【来】【。】【林】【子】【里】【的】【动】【物】【们】【、】【植】【物】【们】【都】【安】【卧】【在】【这】【片】【林】【子】【里】【面】【,】【次】【第】【进】【入】【梦】【乡】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【美】【丽】【的】【大】【自】【然】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【美】【丽】【的】【家】【乡】【!】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【美】【丽】【的】【竹】【林】【啊】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【作】【者】【在】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【中】【,】【能】【按】【照】【时】【间】【先】【后】【顺】【序】【,】【描】【写】【家】【乡】【景】【物】【,】【层】【次】【井】【然】【,】【并】【能】【很】【好】【地】【抓】【住】【竹】【林】【如】【诗】【如】【画】【的】【特】【点】【,】【写】【出】【竹】【林】【的】【风】【采】【。】【可】【见】【小】【作】【者】【平】【日】【对】【生】【活】【做】【到】【了】【细】【细】【品】【味】【,】【只】【有】【这】【样】【,】【才】【能】【将】【自】【己】【的】【真】【切】【感】【受】【诉】【诸】【笔】【端】【,】【抒】【我】【情】【,】【写】【我】【心】【,】【这】【是】【值】【得】【肯】【定】【的】【,】【同】【时】【将】【林】【中】【的】【花】【鸟】【虫】【草】【细】【致】【描】【绘】【,】【做】【到】【静】【态】【与】【动】【态】【结】【合】【,】【远】【景】【、】【近】【景】【与】【特】【写】【镜】【头】【相】【结】【合】【,】【写】【出】【了】【层】【次】【感】【,】【令】【人】【陶】【醉】【。】【当】【然】【,】【从】【总】【体】【来】【看】【,】【对】【家】【乡】【景】【物】【的】【描】【绘】【,】【笔】【力】【还】【略】【显】【得】【单】【薄】【,】【还】【有】【进】【一】【步】【展】【开】【的】【余】【地】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【足】【之】【处】【是】【未】【能】【抓】【住】【竹】【子】【所】【象】【征】【的】【特】【有】【品】【质】【进】【行】【描】【绘】【,】【升】【华】【主】【题】【,】【如】【果】【能】【从】【其】【象】【征】【意】【义】【上】【开】【拓】【,】【化】【实】【为】【虚】【,】【文】【章】【就】【更】【有】【起】【色】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【黄】【晓】【枫】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】湖南桂花树【<】【p】【>】【在】【我】【很】【小】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【跟】【奶】【奶】【生】【活】【在】【老】【家】【阜】【平】【的】【村】【子】【里】【,】【那】【里】【青】【山】【环】【绕】【,】【村】【中】【间】【有】【一】【条】【一】【米】【多】【宽】【的】【小】【河】【,】【河】【滩】【上】【有】【各】【种】【各】【样】【的】【石】【头】【、】【沙】【子】【,】【河】【边】【长】【满】【了】【绿】【草】【和】【小】【花】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

湖南桂花树:神奇的“海洋宝宝”

【<】【p】【>】【我】【也】【想】【得】【第】【一】【名】【,】【但】【是】【必】【须】【得】【更】【加】【认】【真】【学】【习】【。】【老】【师】【说】【过】【,】【你】【付】【出】【多】【少】【,】【收】【获】【也】【有】【多】【少】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】湖南桂花树【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【文】【学】【是】【源】【于】【现】【实】【又】【高】【于】【现】【实】【的】【。】【”】【文】【学】【作】【品】【的】【写】【作】【对】【象】【是】【客】【观】【存】【在】【的】【现】【实】【生】【活】【,】【但】【又】【不】【是】【单】【纯】【写】【实】【,】【它】【要】【在】【写】【实】【的】【基】【础】【上】【,】【创】【设】【氛】【围】【,】【营】【造】【意】【境】【、】【展】【开】【联】【想】【和】【想】【象】【,】【运】【用】【夸】【张】【等】【手】【法】【,】【对】【过】【去】【的】【事】【情】【进】【行】【回】【忆】【,】【对】【未】【来】【进】【行】【预】【设】【等】【等】【,】【进】【而】【达】【到】【文】【学】【作】【品】【的】【多】【层】【面】【目】【的】【。】【事】【实】【上】【,】【无】【论】【在】【哪】【一】【个】【文】【学】【领】【域】【当】【中】【,】【那】【些】【生】【动】【感】【人】【的】【经】【典】【作】【品】【,】【都】【是】【娴】【熟】【地】【运】【用】【“】【化】【虚】【为】【实】【”】【写】【法】【的】【产】【物】【。】【李】【煜】【的】【“】【问】【君】【能】【有】【几】【多】【愁】【,】【恰】【似】【一】【江】【春】【水】【向】【东】【流】【”】【,】【把】【抽】【象】【的】【愁】【写】【成】【一】【江】【春】【水】【,】【具】【有】【穿】【越】【千】【载】【的】【力】【量】【;】【《】【春】【望】【》】【中】【杜】【甫】【的】【“】【感】【时】【花】【溅】【泪】【,】【恨】【别】【鸟】【惊】【心】【”】【,】【用】【花】【鸟】【写】【情】【,】【化】【虚】【为】【实】【,】【更】【加】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【;】【陶】【渊】【明】【《】【桃】【花】【源】【记】【》】【寄】【予】【了】【作】【者】【愤】【世】【嫉】【俗】【,】【归】【隐】【田】【园】【的】【理】【想】【;】【朱】【自】【清】【的】【名】【篇】【《】【春】【》】【,】【把】【对】【春】【的】【热】【爱】【赞】【美】【,】【化】【成】【一】【幅】【又】【一】【幅】【美】【丽】【的】【图】【画】【,】【让】【读】【者】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【沉】【醉】【其】【中】【;】【鲁】【黎】【的】【《】【泥】【土】【》】【以】【实】【写】【虚】【,】【仅】【短】【短】【的】【四】【行】【字】【,】【却】【尽】【情】【讴】【歌】【了】【甘】【于】【平】【凡】【、】【无】【私】【奉】【献】【的】【精】【神】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【所】【谓】【“】【化】【虚】【为】【实】【”】【就】【是】【对】【那】【些】【比】【较】【抽】【象】【、】【含】【蓄】【或】【主】【观】【性】【较】【强】【的】【话】【题】【或】【命】【题】【,】【由】【此】【及】【彼】【,】【展】【开】【联】【想】【,】【通】【过】【具】【体】【的】【叙】【述】【或】【描】【写】【来】【揭】【示】【话】【题】【的】【本】【质】【或】【意】【义】【,】【诠】【释】【话】【题】【内】【蕴】【,】【让】【读】【者】【感】【受】【领】【悟】【写】【作】【者】【对】【话】【题】【的】【独】【到】【见】【解】【和】【思】【想】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【写】【作】【话】【题】【作】【文】【时】【,】【有】【的】【话】【题】【比】【较】【抽】【象】【,】【是】【一】【个】【“】【虚】【”】【的】【话】【题】【,】【学】【会】【了】【这】【种】【写】【法】【就】【能】【在】【写】【作】【时】【迅】【速】【准】【确】【地】【立】【意】【。】【如】【“】【偶】【然】【”】【这】【个】【话】【题】【,】【你】【可】【往】【实】【处】【想】【,】【写】【出】【《】【偶】【遇】【李】【白】【》】【《】【老】【爸】【的】【偶】【然】【》】【等】【命】【题】【。】【又】【如】【“】【爱】【”】【这】【个】【话】【题】【,】【太】【大】【也】【太】【抽】【象】【,】【爱】【是】【什】【么】【?】【答】【案】【太】【多】【、】【太】【复】【杂】【,】【写】【起】【来】【不】【好】【把】【握】【,】【但】【是】【我】【们】【完】【全】【可】【以】【写】【实】【实】【在】【在】【的】【母】【爱】【,】【写】【师】【生】【情】【,】【用】【具】【体】【事】【例】【诠】【释】【“】【爱】【”】【这】【个】【话】【题】【。】【再】【如】【“】【接】【受】【和】【付】【出】【”】【这】【一】【话】【题】【。】【我】【们】【知】【道】【,】【“】【接】【受】【与】【付】【出】【”】【是】【一】【个】【抽】【象】【的】【概】【念】【,】【有】【的】【同】【学】【会】【想】【到】【:】【没】【有】【付】【出】【就】【没】【有】【接】【受】【,】【接】【受】【就】【要】【付】【出】【,】【它】【们】【是】【相】【辅】【相】【成】【的】【关】【系】【,】【不】【能】【一】【味】【接】【受】【,】【要】【学】【会】【付】【出】【。】【这】【样】【的】【立】【意】【,】【写】【作】【的】【策】【略】【就】【应】【是】【 】【“】【化】【虚】【为】【实】【”】【。】【“】【接】【受】【与】【付】【出】【”】【是】【一】【对】【相】【反】【相】【对】【的】【概】【念】【,】【命】【题】【者】【用】【一】【个】【“】【与】【”】【字】【把】【它】【们】【链】【接】【到】【一】【个】【话】【题】【里】【,】【不】【能】【只】【谈】【接】【受】【或】【只】【谈】【付】【出】【,】【我】【们】【可】【以】【通】【过】【写】【二】【者】【的】【互】【相】【转】【化】【,】【揭】【示】【出】【一】【定】【的】【哲】【理】【。】【具】【体】【写】【作】【中】【,】【可】【以】【通】【过】【生】【活】【中】【的】【具】【体】【故】【事】【或】【场】【景】【来】【表】【现】【对】【话】【题】【意】【义】【的】【理】【解】【。】【比】【如】【写】【自】【己】【学】【习】【滑】【冰】【,】【付】【出】【了】【摔】【倒】【甚】【至】【受】【伤】【后】【,】【换】【来】【了】【成】【功】【;】【写】【练】【习】【游】【泳】【,】【付】【出】【了】【呛】【水】【和】【疲】【惫】【后】【,】【成】【为】【了】【运】【动】【健】【将】【。】【比】【如】【写】【蛹】【之】【化】【蝶】【、】【蝉】【之】【脱】【壳】【、】【雏】【鹰】【学】【飞】【,】【付】【出】【了】【艰】【辛】【和】【痛】【苦】【,】【却】【换】【来】【了】【新】【生】【,】【等】【等】【这】【样】【调】【动】【生】【活】【积】【累】【,】【综】【合】【运】【用】【多】【种】【描】【写】【手】【段】【,】【可】【以】【写】【出】【一】【篇】【声】【情】【并】【茂】【的】【记】【叙】【文】【,】【也】【可】【以】【由】【一】【个】【接】【受】【挫】【折】【的】【小】【故】【事】【联】【想】【到】【许】【许】【多】【多】【各】【行】【各】【业】【的】【成】【功】【人】【士】【,】【他】【们】【都】【是】【破】【茧】【成】【蝶】【的】【典】【范】【,】【这】【样】【就】【把】【由】【两】【个】【抽】【象】【词】【语】【构】【成】【的】【抽】【象】【概】【念】【“】【化】【虚】【为】【实】【”】【了】【。】【再】【来】【看】【下】【面】【的】【话】【题】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【冬】【天】【来】【了】【,】【春】【天】【还】【会】【远】【吗】【?】【”】【英】【国】【诗】【人】【雪】【莱】【的】【这】【一】【名】【句】【曾】【激】【励】【过】【无】【数】【处】【于】【艰】【难】【困】【顿】【中】【的】【心】【灵】【。】【的】【确】【,】【当】【你】【的】【世】【界】【弥】【漫】【着】【阴】【风】【冷】【雨】【时】【,】【当】【你】【的】【努】【力】【被】【挫】【折】【之】【刀】【割】【得】【七】【零】【八】【碎】【时】【,】【当】【美】【丽】【的】【期】【待】【结】【出】【了】【失】【望】【的】【果】【子】【时】【,】【那】【么】【,】【让】【我】【们】【学】【会】【种】【植】【希】【望】【。】【种】【植】【一】【粒】【种】【子】【,】【会】【收】【获】【一】【个】【金】【色】【的】【秋】【天】【,】【种】【植】【一】【个】【信】【念】【,】【会】【收】【获】【一】【个】【充】【实】【的】【人】【生】【,】【而】【种】【植】【一】【个】【希】【望】【,】【会】【让】【我】【们】【在】【冬】【天】【的】【苍】【白】【中】【永】【葆】【生】【命】【的】【鲜】【亮】【,】【会】【让】【我】【们】【在】【坎】【坷】【人】【生】【路】【上】【保】【持】【斗】【志】【的】【昂】【扬】【。】【种】【植】【希】【望】【,】【这】【是】【一】【种】【心】【灵】【智】【慧】【,】【是】【一】【种】【生】【活】【技】【巧】【,】【它】【让】【我】【们】【失】【望】【时】【不】【绝】【望】【,】【失】【意】【时】【不】【失】【志】【,】【永】【远】【扬】【起】【生】【命】【绿】【色】【的】【风】【帆】【,】【向】【着】【梦】【中】【的】【春】【天】【进】【发】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【请】【以】【“】【种】【植】【希】【望】【”】【为】【话】【题】【写】【一】【篇】【作】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【个】【话】【题】【的】【材】【料】【虽】【然】【有】【助】【于】【考】【生】【打】【开】【思】【维】【,】【但】【是】【话】【题】【本】【身】【十】【分】【笼】【统】【、】【抽】【象】【,】【因】【为】【“】【希】【望】【”】【本】【来】【就】【是】【虚】【无】【缥】【缈】【的】【,】【“】【种】【植】【希】【望】【”】【使】【话】【题】【命】【题】【更】【加】【抽】【象】【。】【如】【果】【不】【能】【用】【事】【实】【说】【话】【,】【就】【会】【犯】【言】【之】【无】【物】【、】【言】【之】【无】【味】【的】【毛】【病】【。】【最】【好】【以】【具】【体】【的】【事】【件】【为】【依】【托】【,】【“】【化】【虚】【为】【实】【”】【地】【进】【行】【记】【叙】【,】【这】【样】【文】【章】【内】【容】【才】【会】【显】【得】【充】【实】【、】【具】【体】【。】【与】【希】【望】【有】【关】【的】【事】【件】【是】【不】【胜】【枚】【举】【的】【,】【只】【要】【打】【开】【思】【路】【,】【或】【小】【或】【大】【、】【或】【自】【己】【或】【他】【人】【、】【或】【古】【或】【今】【、】【或】【由】【中】【及】【外】【,】【就】【能】【得】【到】【“】【内】【容】【充】【实】【”】【的】【基】【础】【等】【级】【分】【。】【有】【关】【希】【望】【的】【名】【人】【逸】【事】【、】【格】【言】【警】【句】【、】【诗】【词】【歌】【赋】【很】【多】【,】【我】【们】【可】【以】【拿】【来】【用】【。】【另】【外】【也】【可】【以】【赋】【予】【“】【希】【望】【”】【以】【一】【系】【列】【形】【象】【可】【感】【的】【比】【喻】【,】【这】【样】【会】【使】【语】【言】【更】【有】【文】【采】【,】【内】【容】【更】【丰】【富】【,】【从】【而】【得】【到】【“】【有】【文】【采】【”】【的】【发】【展】【等】【级】【分】【。】【请】【看】【下】【面】【的】【例】【文】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【有】【希】【望】【就】【有】【远】【方】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【明】【亮】【的】【灯】【光】【下】【,】【伴】【随】【着】【树】【木】【摇】【曳】【的】【影】【子】【,】【我】【一】【口】【气】【读】【完】【了】【刚】【买】【回】【不】【久】【的】【 】【《】【 】【雾】【都】【孤】【儿】【 】【》】【 】【。】【这】【本】【书】【是】【英】【国】【著】【名】【作】【家】【狄】【更】【斯】【写】【的】【,】【主】【要】【讲】【述】【的】【是】【孤】【儿】【奥】【利】【弗】【遭】【受】【寄】【养】【所】【的】【折】【磨】【、】【棺】【材】【铺】【的】【毒】【打】【后】【,】【只】【身】【前】【往】【伦】【敦】【,】【又】【不】【幸】【落】【入】【贼】【窝】【,】【经】【过】【几】【番】【周】【折】【,】【终】【于】【在】【一】【些】【好】【心】【人】【的】【帮】【助】【下】【夺】【回】【了】【遗】【产】【,】【解】【开】【了】【身】【世】【之】【谜】【的】【故】【事】【。】【合】【上】【书】【,】【映】【入】【眼】【帘】【的】【是】【书】【上】【的】【一】【幅】【画】【,】【画】【上】【画】【着】【:】【在】【一】【个】【伸】【手】【不】【见】【五】【指】【的】【夜】【晚】【,】【一】【个】【男】【孩】【走】【在】【一】【条】【乡】【间】【小】【路】【上】【,】【那】【男】【孩】【穿】【得】【破】【烂】【不】【堪】【,】【衣】【服】【上】【打】【满】【了】【补】【丁】【,】【头】【发】【凌】【乱】【,】【神】【情】【疲】【惫】【而】【坚】【定】【,】【给】【人】【一】【种】【不】【达】【目】【的】【不】【罢】【休】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【他】【的】【嘴】【角】【流】【露】【出】【一】【丝】【不】【易】【察】【觉】【的】【微】【笑】【,】【是】【舒】【心】【的】【笑】【?】【傲】【慢】【的】【笑】【?】【还】【是】【 】【…】【…】【 】【我】【不】【知】【道】【。】【远】【处】【隐】【约】【有】【一】【团】【光】【,】【那】【男】【孩】【大】【步】【流】【星】【地】【往】【那】【边】【走】【,】【他】【深】【知】【:】【有】【光】【就】【有】【希】【望】【,】【有】【希】【望】【就】【有】【远】【方】【。】【他】【的】【胸】【膛】【中】【燃】【起】【一】【团】【火】【,】【我】【知】【道】【,】【那】【是】【希】【望】【之】【火】【,】【一】【个】【从】【小】【就】【受】【尽】【虐】【待】【的】【男】【孩】【是】【多】【么】【渴】【望】【得】【到】【光】【明】【和】【温】【暖】【啊】【!】【他】【就】【是】【这】【样】【坚】【定】【不】【移】【地】【往】【前】【走】【。】【他】【坚】【信】【:】【自】【己】【一】【定】【能】【得】【到】【光】【明】【。】【这】【一】【刻】【,】【我】【被】【震】【撼】【了】【,】【被】【这】【种】【执】【著】【的】【精】【神】【所】【震】【撼】【了】【,】【想】【不】【到】【这】【个】【饱】【受】【迫】【害】【的】【男】【孩】【竟】【然】【拥】【有】【这】【么】【美】【好】【的】【精】【神】【。】【是】【的】【,】【执】【著】【,】【靠】【的】【是】【那】【团】【希】【望】【之】【火】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【再】【细】【看】【这】【幅】【画】【,】【发】【现】【在】【那】【个】【男】【孩】【的】【前】【面】【赫】【然】【有】【几】【块】【大】【大】【小】【小】【的】【石】【头】【,】【想】【必】【就】【是】【人】【们】【常】【说】【的】【“】【拦】【路】【虎】【”】【“】【绊】【脚】【石】【”】【了】【,】【男】【孩】【也】【瞅】【见】【了】【它】【们】【,】【脸】【上】【丝】【毫】【没】【有】【畏】【惧】【之】【色】【,】【依】【然】【镇】【定】【自】【若】【、】【从】【容】【不】【迫】【,】【我】【打】【心】【眼】【儿】【里】【佩】【服】【他】【。】【是】【啊】【,】【在】【人】【生】【的】【道】【路】【上】【,】【不】【可】【能】【一】【帆】【风】【顺】【,】【生】【活】【和】【命】【运】【也】【不】【可】【能】【公】【平】【,】【但】【只】【要】【内】【心】【充】【满】【希】【望】【,】【以】【顽】【强】【的】【意】【志】【和】【非】【凡】【的】【韧】【劲】【去】【战】【胜】【困】【难】【,】【生】【命】【就】【会】【产】【生】【奇】【迹】【。】【困】【难】【并】【不】【可】【怕】【,】【可】【怕】【的】【是】【心】【中】【没】【有】【希】【望】【。】【希】【望】【也】【就】【是】【坚】【定】【的】【信】【念】【,】【没】【有】【了】【希】【望】【,】【也】【失】【去】【了】【目】【标】【,】【生】【活】【也】【没】【有】【了】【意】【义】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【以】【前】【干】【什】【么】【事】【情】【都】【没】【信】【心】【,】【“】【我】【不】【行】【”】【成】【了】【我】【的】【口】【头】【禅】【,】【遇】【到】【什】【么】【困】【难】【都】【只】【是】【叹】【口】【气】【,】【根】【本】【不】【敢】【面】【对】【困】【难】【,】【更】【别】【说】【是】【战】【胜】【了】【,】【甚】【至】【对】【考】【试】【也】【没】【什】【么】【信】【心】【,】【虽】【然】【我】【的】【成】【绩】【并】【不】【是】【很】【差】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【读】【了】【这】【本】【书】【后】【,】【我】【决】【心】【跟】【以】【前】【那】【个】【胆】【小】【怕】【事】【的】【自】【己】【告】【别】【,】【做】【一】【个】【内】【心】【充】【满】【希】【望】【、】【做】【任】【何】【事】【情】【都】【有】【信】【心】【的】【我】【。】【有】【希】【望】【就】【有】【远】【方】【,】【只】【要】【我】【们】【内】【心】【充】【满】【希】【望】【,】【胜】【利】【就】【在】【眼】【前】【,】【让】【我】【们】【跟】【着】【希】【望】【,】【向】【前】【!】【向】【前】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【中】【学】【生】【作】【文】【。】【小】【作】【者】【用】【自】【己】【读】【书】【的】【片】【段】【经】【历】【,】【把】【一】【个】【抽】【象】【的】【大】【话】【题】【,】【写】【成】【一】【个】【自】【己】【如】【何】【改】【变】【自】【己】【的】【小】【故】【事】【,】【具】【体】【描】【写】【了】【自】【己】【由】【怯】【懦】【到】【树】【立】【信】【心】【的】【心】【路】【历】【程】【,】【有】【理】【有】【据】【,】【化】【抽】【象】【为】【具】【体】【,】【读】【来】【没】【有】【一】【点】【空】【洞】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【可】【以】【看】【成】【是】【他】【读】【《】【雾】【都】【孤】【儿】【》】【的】【读】【后】【感】【,】【不】【同】【的】【是】【,】【作】【者】【只】【选】【取】【了】【一】【个】【对】【自】【己】【影】【响】【最】【大】【的】【方】【面】【,】【就】【把】【“】【种】【植】【希】【望】【”】【这】【个】【抽】【象】【的】【话】【题】【落】【到】【了】【实】【处】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【那】【么】【,】【用】【什】【么】【方】【法】【可】【以】【在】【写】【文】【章】【时】【达】【到】【化】【虚】【为】【实】【的】【目】【的】【呢】【?】【首】【先】【我】【们】【要】【知】【道】【,】【所】【谓】【“】【虚】【实】【”】【,】【就】【写】【作】【方】【法】【而】【言】【,】【详】【细】【为】【实】【,】【简】【略】【为】【虚】【;】【具】【体】【为】【实】【,】【抽】【象】【为】【虚】【;】【有】【据】【为】【实】【,】【假】【托】【为】【虚】【。】【就】【表】【现】【对】【象】【而】【言】【,】【景】【为】【实】【,】【情】【为】【虚】【;】【眼】【见】【为】【实】【,】【想】【象】【为】【虚】【;】【已】【知】【为】【实】【,】【未】【知】【为】【虚】【。】【理】【解】【了】【这】【些】【,】【也】【就】【找】【到】【了】【化】【虚】【为】【实】【的】【突】【破】【口】【。】【针】【对】【中】【学】【生】【的】【认】【知】【水】【平】【和】【写】【作】【能】【力】【,】【我】【们】【认】【为】【最】【常】【见】【也】【最】【容】【易】【掌】【握】【的】【化】【虚】【为】【实】【的】【方】【法】【有】【两】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【抓】【住】【特】【征】【运】【用】【比】【喻】【等】【修】【辞】【进】【行】【细】【致】【描】【写】【,】【借】【景】【(】【物】【)】【抒】【情】【,】【托】【物】【言】【志】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【写】【文】【章】【首】【要】【的】【一】【点】【,】【当】【然】【还】【是】【立】【足】【于】【写】【实】【。】【写】【真】【实】【的】【事】【物】【、】【真】【实】【的】【事】【件】【、】【真】【实】【的】【人】【和】【社】【会】【。】【用】【实】【在】【的】【有】【形】【的】【事】【物】【来】【表】【现】【虚】【幻】【的】【无】【形】【的】【东】【西】【,】【化】【虚】【为】【实】【,】【化】【抽】【象】【为】【具】【象】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【写】【实】【,】【可】【以】【采】【用】【正】【面】【直】【接】【描】【摹】【的】【方】【法】【,】【讲】【求】【形】【似】【,】【传】【神】【地】【表】【现】【事】【物】【的】【形】【象】【特】【征】【,】【但】【是】【事】【实】【上】【,】【除】【了】【游】【记】【等】【写】【景】【文】【章】【外】【,】【我】【们】【写】【事】【物】【的】【文】【章】【,】【往】【往】【是】【景】【为】【情】【设】【,】【物】【为】【情】【设】【;】【借】【景】【抒】【情】【,】【借】【物】【抒】【情】【。】【在】【这】【里】【,】【景】【、】【物】【为】【实】【,】【情】【感】【为】【虚】【。】【也】【就】【是】【说】【要】【借】【景】【(】【物】【)】【抒】【情】【的】【情】【感】【是】【看】【不】【见】【摸】【不】【着】【的】【,】【要】【将】【这】【种】【虚】【表】【现】【出】【来】【,】【就】【得】【化】【情】【为】【景】【(】【物】【)】【、】【化】【虚】【为】【实】【。】【教】【材】【中】【选】【入】【的】【《】【爱】【莲】【说】【》】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【,】【是】【借】【物】【抒】【情】【的】【典】【范】【之】【作】【。】【作】【品】【抓】【住】【了】【莲】【“】【出】【淤】【泥】【而】【不】【染】【,】【濯】【清】【涟】【而】【不】【妖】【,】【中】【通】【外】【直】【,】【不】【蔓】【不】【枝】【,】【香】【远】【益】【清】【,】【亭】【亭】【净】【植】【,】【可】【远】【观】【而】【不】【可】【亵】【玩】【焉】【”】【这】【一】【形】【象】【特】【征】【,】【含】【蓄】【地】【表】【达】【了】【自】【己】【追】【求】【莲】【一】【样】【洁】【身】【自】【好】【及】【正】【直】【的】【人】【生】【境】【界】【,】【是】【自】【我】【人】【格】【的】【象】【征】【。】【读】【完】【了】【《】【爱】【莲】【说】【》】【,】【我】【们】【眼】【前】【闪】【现】【的】【是】【一】【个】【人】【的】【性】【格】【品】【质】【,】【这】【就】【达】【到】【了】【借】【物】【抒】【情】【的】【最】【高】【境】【界】【。】【我】【们】【来】【赏】【读】【一】【篇】【百】【读】【不】【厌】【的】【学】【生】【作】【品】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【放】【下】【书】【包】【,】【看】【到】【妈】【妈】【正】【在】【择】【菜】【。】【我】【立】【马】【奔】【了】【过】【去】【,】【抢】【下】【妈】【妈】【手】【中】【的】【青】【菜】【,】【喊】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【我】【来】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【要】【刷】【盘】【子】【。】【我】【又】【以】【闪】【电】【般】【的】【速】【度】【拉】【起】【妈】【妈】【,】【说】【:】【“】【妈】【妈】【,】【这】【个】【我】【也】【能】【行】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【用】【奇】【怪】【的】【目】【光】【打】【量】【着】【我】【,】【摇】【摇】【头】【,】【不】【解】【地】【笑】【了】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【在】【我】【们】【母】【子】【的】【共】【同】【努】【力】【下】【,】【饭】【很】【快】【做】【好】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【坐】【在】【饭】【桌】【前】【,】【我】【迅】【速】【打】【开】【了】【电】【视】【,】【正】【胡】【乱】【地】【调】【着】【频】【道】【,】【忽】【然】【想】【起】【了】【什】【么】【,】【便】【起】【身】【恭】【恭】【敬】【敬】【地】【把】【遥】【控】【器】【送】【到】【妈】【妈】【手】【中】【,】【虽】【然】【很】【不】【舍】【,】【但】【依】【然】【面】【带】【醉】【人】【的】【微】【笑】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【拿】【到】【这】【个】【以】【往】【抢】【都】【难】【以】【到】【手】【的】【遥】【控】【器】【,】【反】【而】【没】【有】【了】【看】【电】【视】【的】【兴】【趣】【,】【像】【看】【外】【星】【人】【似】【的】【盯】【着】【我】【,】【问】【:】【“】【有】【什】【么】【事】【吗】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【强】【笑】【道】【:】【“】【你】【的】【儿】【子】【这】【么】【乖】【,】【能】【有】【啥】【事】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【疑】【惑】【地】【摇】【摇】【头】【说】【:】【“】【是】【不】【是】【又】【要】【买】【什】【么】【东】【西】【,】【想】【要】【钱】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【嗔】【怪】【道】【:】【“】【妈】【!】【干】【吗】【把】【你】【儿】【子】【想】【得】【那】【么】【阴】【呢】【?】【我】【只】【是】【突】【然】【良】【心】【发】【现】【,】【想】【多】【为】【妈】【妈】【您】【做】【一】【点】【事】【而】【已】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【叹】【道】【:】【“】【切】【!】【你】【良】【心】【发】【现】【?】【我】【怀】【疑】【你】【根】【本】【没】【长】【良】【心】【?】【到】【底】【什】【么】【事】【?】【说】【!】【是】【不】【是】【要】【的】【钱】【太】【多】【?】【到】【底】【多】【少】【?】【如】【果】【有】【恰】【当】【的】【理】【由】【,】【我】【可】【以】【考】【虑】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【无】【话】【可】【说】【,】【又】【不】【得】【不】【说】【,】【只】【有】【小】【声】【应】【道】【:】【“】【妈】【—】【—】【,】【真】【不】【是】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【妈】【妈】【做】【冥】【思】【苦】【想】【状】【,】【忽】【然】【问】【道】【:】【“】【这】【次】【考】【试】【多】【少】【分】【?】【进】【步】【还】【是】【退】【步】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【终】【还】【是】【被】【妈】【妈】【察】【觉】【了】【!】【做】【贼】【心】【虚】【的】【我】【,】【一】【边】【嘟】【哝】【着】【连】【自】【己】【都】【听】【不】【懂】【的】【鬼】【话】【,】【一】【边】【心】【惊】【胆】【战】【地】【准】【备】【迎】【接】【暴】【风】【雨】【的】【袭】【击】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【妈】【妈】【不】【但】【没】【说】【我】【,】【反】【而】【安】【慰】【我】【:】【“】【考】【得】【不】【好】【,】【继】【续】【努】【力】【就】【是】【了】【!】【我】【不】【会】【怪】【你】【的】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【听】【了】【妈】【妈】【的】【话】【,】【我】【长】【长】【地】【松】【了】【口】【气】【,】【可】【刚】【安】【顿】【好】【那】【颗】【通】【通】【乱】【蹦】【的】【心】【,】【妈】【妈】【忽】【又】【高】【声】【道】【:】【“】【但】【是】【,】【家】【务】【活】【还】【是】【要】【像】【今】【天】【这】【样】【做】【哟】【!】【可】【不】【能】【再】【偷】【懒】【了】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【是】【!】【妈】【,】【干】【吗】【那】【么】【大】【声】【呢】【!】【吓】【我】【一】【跳】【!】【”】【我】【立】【正】【、】【敬】【礼】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【危】【机】【化】【解】【!】【又】【是】【一】【个】【平】【安】【周】【末】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【魏】【诗】【田】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【作】【者】【很】【会】【构】【思】【,】【能】【把】【极】【平】【常】【的】【生】【活】【小】【事】【写】【得】【富】【有】【波】【澜】【,】【还】【带】【有】【浓】【厚】【的】【人】【情】【味】【,】【读】【起】【来】【颇】【有】【意】【趣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【中】【的】【小】【男】【孩】【,】【一】【回】【家】【门】【,】【就】【主】【动】【帮】【妈】【妈】【干】【家】【务】【,】【还】【“】【高】【风】【格】【”】【地】【把】【看】【电】【视】【的】【“】【权】【利】【”】【让】【给】【妈】【妈】【,】【其】【乖】【巧】【让】【妈】【妈】【不】【由】【得】【感】【到】【“】【蹊】【跷】【”】【,】【连】【读】【者】【也】【感】【到】【疑】【惑】【,】【这】【个】【平】【时】【的】【“】【懒】【蛋】【”】【怎】【么】【一】【下】【子】【变】【了】【?】【原】【来】【是】【儿】【子】【考】【试】【“】【砸】【锅】【”】【了】【,】【为】【了】【免】【去】【妈】【妈】【的】【一】【顿】【臭】【骂】【才】【来】【“】【演】【戏】【”】【。】【虽】【然】【如】【此】【,】【但】【读】【者】【并】【不】【觉】【得】【儿】【子】【虚】【伪】【,】【反】【而】【觉】【得】【他】【还】【是】【个】【好】【孩】【子】【,】【因】【为】【他】【知】【道】【“】【犯】【了】【错】【误】【”】【应】【该】【主】【动】【和】【家】【长】【沟】【通】【,】【求】【得】【爸】【妈】【的】【原】【谅】【。】【他】【最】【终】【感】【动】【了】【妈】【妈】【,】【妈】【妈】【没】【发】【火】【,】【使】【家】【庭】【保】【持】【和】【谐】【。】【这】【个】【孩】【子】【的】【品】【德】【是】【值】【得】【赞】【扬】【的】【。】【他】【的】【行】【为】【使】【我】【们】【认】【识】【到】【,】【两】【代】【人】【之】【间】【的】【“】【代】【沟】【”】【是】【可】【以】【填】【平】【的】【。】【经】【过】【相】【互】【沟】【通】【和】【调】【和】【是】【可】【以】【达】【到】【彼】【此】【的】【宽】【容】【和】【理】【解】【的】【。】【而】【这】【正】【是】【文】【章】【要】【彰】【显】【的】【主】【题】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【中】【人】【物】【的】【语】【言】【和】【表】【情】【动】【作】【描】【写】【十】【分】【生】【动】【形】【象】【,】【且】【符】【合】【人】【物】【的】【身】【份】【和】【性】【格】【特】【征】【。】【人】【物】【之】【间】【的】【对】【话】【个】【性】【化】【、】【口】【语】【化】【,】【既】【符】【合】【母】【子】【各】【自】【的】【口】【吻】【,】【又】【充】【满】【生】【活】【气】【息】【,】【值】【得】【初】【学】【写】【作】【者】【学】【习】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【甫】【田】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】湖南桂花树【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【阵】【寒】【风】【吹】【过】【,】【落】【叶】【飘】【飞】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【打】【了】【个】【寒】【战】【。】【今】【年】【的】【冬】【季】【似】【乎】【比】【往】【年】【来】【得】【早】【。】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【晃】【,】【妈】【妈】【离】【开】【这】【个】【世】【界】【已】【经】【七】【个】【多】【月】【了】【!】【我】【常】【常】【翘】【首】【仰】【望】【苍】【穹】【,】【从】【心】【里】【发】【出】【无】【数】【遍】【的】【呼】【唤】【—】【—】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【你】【在】【天】【国】【的】【何】【方】【?】【你】【是】【否】【能】【看】【到】【我】【的】【身】【影】【?】【你】【能】【听】【见】【女】【儿】【对】【你】【深】【情】【的】【呼】【唤】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 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】【当】【你】【走】【后】【,】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【总】【是】【浮】【现】【出】【你】【那】【张】【充】【满】【病】【态】【而】【又】【温】【和】【的】【脸】【。】【我】【想】【:】【也】【许】【是】【由】【于】【我】【这】【个】【年】【龄】【段】【女】【孩】【的】【逆】【反】【心】【理】【,】【其】【实】【每】【次】【都】【是】【我】【在】【故】【意】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【故】【意】【找】【碴】【儿】【与】【你】【争】【吵】【。】【如】【果】【说】【有】【错】【的】【话】【,】【那】【可】【是】【全】【在】【我】【呀】【!】【如】【果】【说】【该】【道】【歉】【的】【话】【,】【那】【也】【是】【该】【我】【向】【你】【道】【歉】【呀】【!】【再】【说】【,】【你】【已】【身】【患】【重】【病】【,】【可】【以】【想】【象】【,】【那】【晚】【你】【来】【看】【我】【,】【一】【定】【是】【在】【你】【的】【病】【痛】【稍】【稍】【减】【轻】【后】【,】【才】【手】【忙】【脚】【乱】【地】【收】【拾】【好】【了】【我】【落】【下】【的】【一】【些】【东】【西】【,】【然】【后】【拖】【着】【病】【体】【,】【在】【朦】【胧】【的】【夜】【色】【中】【,】【赶】【了】【1】【0】【多】【里】【的】【山】【路】【而】【来】【。】【看】【样】【子】【,】【为】【了】【不】【打】【扰】【我】【的】【学】【习】【,】【你】【一】【定】【站】【在】【窗】【外】【等】【了】【许】【久】【,】【直】【到】【下】【课】【铃】【响】【起】【,】【你】【才】【怯】【生】【生】【地】【呼】【唤】【我】【的】【名】【字】【…】【…】【想】【到】【这】【里】【,】【我】【愧】【疚】【难】【当】【。】【我】【在】【心】【里】【保】【证】【:】【这】【次】【回】【家】【后】【,】【我】【一】【定】【先】【给】【你】【道】【歉】【,】【并】【且】【从】【此】【永】【远】【不】【再】【惹】【你】【生】【气】【,】【永】【远】【不】【再】【让】【你】【伤】【心】【,】【永】【远】【与】【你】【分】【担】【一】【切】【的】【痛】【苦】【…】【…】【可】【是】【,】【一】【切】【都】【太】【迟】【了】【!】【当】【听】【到】【你】【病】【危】【的】【消】【息】【,】【赶】【回】【家】【时】【,】【却】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【你】【站】【在】【门】【口】【焦】【急】【翘】【盼】【我】【的】【身】【影】【;】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【你】【接】【过】【我】【书】【包】【时】【的】【那】【张】【笑】【吟】【吟】【的】【脸】【;】【再】【也】【没】【有】【看】【到】【桌】【上】【你】【为】【我】【准】【备】【好】【的】【丰】【盛】【可】【口】【的】【饭】【菜】【…】【…】【我】【知】【道】【:】【你】【是】【永】【远】【听】【不】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【道】【歉】【了】【!】【你】【是】【永】【远】【看】【不】【到】【女】【儿】【的】【悔】【恨】【了】【!】【你】【也】【永】【远】【不】【能】【听】【到】【女】【儿】【呼】【唤】【你】【的】【声】【音】【了】【!】【可】【是】【,】【我】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【难】【道】【你】【就】【不】【能】【再】【给】【女】【儿】【一】【次】【改】【过】【的】【机】【会】【吗】【?】【难】【道】【你】【忍】【心】【让】【女】【儿】【悔】【恨】【终】【生】【吗】【?】【难】【道】【你】【就】【这】【样】【狠】【心】【地】【撇】【下】【女】【儿】【而】【独】【自】【远】【行】【了】【吗】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【不】【!】【妈】【妈】【,】【女】【儿】【舍】【不】【得】【让】【你】【走】【!】【任】【凭】【我】【千】【呼】【万】【唤】【,】【任】【凭】【我】【撕】【心】【裂】【肺】【,】【我】【割】【舍】【不】【下】【的】【亲】【人】【,】【我】【那】【苦】【命】【而】【又】【伟】【大】【的】【妈】【妈】【还】【是】【走】【了】【!】【可】【是】【,】【1】【5】【年】【的】【光】【阴】【啊】【,】【早】【已】【在】【我】【心】【头】【刻】【上】【了】【一】【道】【深】【深】【的】【印】【记】【,】【我】【又】【怎】【能】【忘】【记】【—】【—】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【拥】【有】【了】【那】【段】【最】【宝】【贵】【、】【最】【永】【恒】【的】【幸】【福】【时】【光】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【从】【一】【个】【懵】【懂】【无】【知】【的】【小】【女】【孩】【成】【长】【为】【一】【个】【知】【书】【达】【理】【、】【乖】【巧】【懂】【事】【的】【中】【学】【生】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【享】【受】【到】【了】【世】【界】【上】【最】【无】【私】【、】【最】【伟】【大】【的】【母】【爱】【;】【因】【为】【有】【了】【你】【,】【我】【才】【携】【着】【感】【恩】【上】【路】【、】【满】【怀】【信】【心】【憧】【憬】【美】【好】【的】【明】【天】【!】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【请】【你】【放】【心】【:】【女】【儿】【一】【定】【不】【会】【辜】【负】【你】【的】【殷】【切】【期】【盼】【,】【我】【会】【化】【悲】【痛】【为】【力】【量】【,】【勤】【奋】【学】【习】【,】【掌】【握】【过】【硬】【本】【领】【,】【做】【一】【个】【有】【用】【的】【人】【。】【请】【你】【相】【信】【,】【女】【儿】【一】【定】【会】【说】【到】【做】【到】【的】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【冬】【季】【是】【确】【切】【地】【来】【临】【了】【,】【门】【前】【的】【那】【棵】【老】【榆】【树】【忧】【郁】【地】【立】【在】【那】【里】【,】【树】【上】【的】【叶】【子】【就】【要】【落】【尽】【,】【只】【剩】【下】【一】【些】【深】【褐】【色】【的】【枝】【条】【,】【杂】【乱】【地】【伸】【向】【天】【空】【。】【一】【只】【乌】【鸦】【呆】【立】【在】【枝】【头】【,】【默】【然】【地】【凝】【望】【着】【我】【那】【孤】【独】【的】【老】【屋】【,】【仿】【佛】【也】【在】【回】【忆】【着】【关】【于】【它】【的】【一】【些】【伤】【心】【往】【事】【。】【遥】【望】【远】【处】【,】【一】【缕】【炊】【烟】【袅】【袅】【升】【起】【,】【我】【的】【思】【绪】【似】【乎】【也】【随】【着】【这】【黄】【昏】【的】【炊】【烟】【飘】【向】【了】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【天】【国】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【亲】【爱】【的】【妈】【妈】【,】【女】【儿】【为】【你】【祈】【祷】【—】【—】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【愿】【你】【在】【天】【国】【一】【切】【安】【好】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【湛】【蓝】【,】【灿】【黄】【,】【洁】【白】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【下】【车】【时】【映】【入】【我】【们】【眼】【帘】【的】【就】【是】【这】【样】【一】【幅】【自】【然】【的】【笔】【触】【所】【勾】【勒】【出】【的】【景】【象】【。】【从】【车】【上】【跳】【下】【一】【名】【男】【生】【,】【深】【吸】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【手】【在】【空】【气】【中】【装】【模】【作】【样】【地】【比】【划】【了】【一】【下】【,】【吸】【足】【了】【周】【围】【人】【好】【奇】【的】【眼】【光】【。】【然】【后】【,】【从】【他】【嘴】【里】【吐】【出】【一】【句】【仿】【佛】【酝】【酿】【许】【久】【的】【话】【语】【—】【—】【“】【大】【海】【啊】【,】【你】【全】【是】【水】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【噗】【”】【,】【我】【们】【全】【都】【忍】【俊】【不】【禁】【,】【而】【海】【边】【之】【旅】【的】【帷】【幕】【就】【这】【样】【徐】【徐】【拉】【开】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【蓝】【天】【,】【白】【云】【,】【金】【沙】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【午】【饭】【后】【,】【大】【家】【都】【在】【海】【边】【玩】【。】【海】【浪】【一】【波】【接】【着】【一】【波】【拍】【打】【在】【沙】【滩】【上】【。】【黄】【色】【的】【沙】【粒】【在】【阳】【光】【的】【照】【耀】【下】【染】【上】【了】【金】【色】【。】【天】【空】【蓝】【得】【一】【尘】【不】【染】【,】【只】【有】【丝】【丝】【白】【云】【闲】【晃】【在】【天】【际】【。】【仅】【三】【种】【色】【彩】【,】【却】【糅】【合】【了】【许】【多】【色】【质】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【宝】【石】【蓝】【的】【天】【空】【,】【鸽】【子】【白】【的】【云】【朵】【,】【柠】【檬】【黄】【或】【兑】【了】【金】【的】【细】【沙】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【傍】【晚】【,】【大】【家】【全】【坐】【在】【沙】【滩】【上】【,】【看】【着】【缓】【缓】【坠】【落】【的】【夕】【阳】【。】【老】【师】【突】【然】【说】【了】【一】【句】【上】【课】【时】【常】【说】【的】【话】【:】【“】【谈】【谈】【对】【面】【前】【景】【象】【的】【感】【受】【吧】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【众】【人】【都】【愣】【了】【一】【下】【。】【随】【即】【班】【长】【最】【先】【发】【话】【:】【“】【我】【觉】【得】【这】【夕】【阳】【最】【美】【,】【但】【是】【它】【是】【一】【天】【中】【象】【征】【离】【别】【的】【时】【候】【,】【难】【免】【令】【人】【悲】【伤】【。】【”】【瞬】【间】【,】【思】【维】【的】【闸】【门】【似】【乎】【被】【拉】【开】【了】【,】【大】【家】【都】【七】【嘴】【八】【舌】【地】【说】【着】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【直】【到】【落】【日】【彻】【底】【被】【山】【遮】【盖】【住】【时】【,】【大】【家】【才】【停】【下】【来】【。】【一】【个】【女】【生】【似】【乎】【被】【大】【家】【的】【话】【语】【所】【触】【动】【,】【抱】【着】【膝】【头】【抽】【泣】【,】【背】【拱】【起】【来】【—】【—】【像】【个】【虾】【米】【似】【的】【缩】【成】【一】【团】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【老】【师】【叹】【了】【一】【口】【气】【,】【看】【着】【我】【们】【一】【字】【一】【句】【地】【说】【道】【:】【“】【即】【使】【落】【日】【象】【征】【离】【别】【,】【即】【使】【它】【已】【落】【山】【,】【却】【仍】【在】【我】【们】【看】【不】【见】【的】【未】【知】【的】【地】【方】【释】【放】【着】【自】【己】【的】【光】【芒】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【班】【长】【感】【慨】【道】【:】【“】【所】【以】【,】【即】【使】【离】【别】【,】【也】【要】【继】【续】【前】【进】【,】【绽】【放】【自】【己】【的】【光】【芒】【吧】【!】【”】【所】【有】【的】【人】【都】【在】【心】【里】【默】【默】【地】【点】【头】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【余】【晖】【之】【下】【,】【一】【排】【排】【影】【子】【向】【着】【落】【日】【的】【方】【向】【跑】【去】【。】【此】【刻】【,】【天】【地】【无】【色】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【高】【帆】【)】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】湖南桂花树【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【就】【像】【手】【中】【的】【流】【沙】【,】【随】【着】【风】【从】【指】【缝】【间】【渐】【渐】【流】【失】【…】【…】【五】【年】【级】【的】【最】【后】【一】【个】【小】【学】【暑】【假】【,】【妈】【妈】【告】【诉】【我】【,】【我】【们】【马】【上】【就】【要】【离】【开】【这】【个】【生】【活】【了】【十】【几】【年】【的】【地】【方】【,】【去】【市】【区】【读】【初】【中】【了】【。】【我】【听】【了】【之】【后】【,】【感】【觉】【心】【里】【空】【荡】【荡】【的】【,】【仿】【佛】【一】【下】【子】【失】【去】【了】【很】【重】【要】【的】【东】【西】【。】【在】【整】【理】【书】【本】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【想】【再】【去】【看】【看】【这】【个】【曾】【经】【与】【我】【朝】【夕】【相】【处】【的】【小】【区】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【区】【里】【常】【见】【的】【人】【大】【都】【是】【老】【爷】【爷】【和】【老】【奶】【奶】【,】【平】【时】【的】【小】【区】【是】【安】【适】【恬】【静】【的】【。】【站】【在】【树】【荫】【下】【的】【小】【路】【上】【,】【我】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【,】【倾】【听】【着】【风】【吹】【树】【叶】【的】【声】【音】【。】【“】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【”】【,】【这】【声】【音】【有】【让】【人】【放】【松】【心】【情】【的】【力】【量】【,】【以】【前】【我】【也】【总】【是】【喜】【欢】【这】【样】【听】【着】【。】【“】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【”】【,】【隔】【壁】【奶】【奶】【的】【叫】【声】【打】【断】【了】【我】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【我】【微】【笑】【着】【走】【过】【去】【,】【挪】【动】【一】【只】【小】【凳】【子】【坐】【在】【她】【的】【旁】【边】【。】【她】【知】【道】【我】【就】【要】【离】【开】【这】【里】【,】【像】【是】【叮】【嘱】【自】【己】【的】【孙】【女】【一】【样】【“】【唠】【叨】【”】【着】【。】【虽】【然】【喋】【喋】【不】【休】【的】【,】【却】【让】【我】【感】【到】【很】【温】【暖】【。】【突】【然】【,】【一】【排】【小】【蚂】【蚁】【排】【着】【整】【齐】【的】【队】【伍】【出】【现】【在】【我】【的】【面】【前】【。】【他】【们】【齐】【心】【协】【力】【地】【搬】【动】【着】【一】【块】【小】【小】【的】【食】【物】【碎】【屑】【。】【碎】【屑】【在】【地】【上】【“】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【”】【地】【移】【动】【着】【。】【小】【时】【候】【的】【一】【幕】【幕】【浮】【现】【在】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【。】【奶】【奶】【们】【聊】【天】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【总】【是】【喜】【欢】【和】【这】【些】【“】【搬】【运】【工】【”】【们】【玩】【,】【有】【时】【用】【脚】【挡】【住】【它】【们】【的】【去】【路】【,】【有】【时】【用】【叶】【片】【或】【者】【小】【石】【头】【堵】【住】【它】【们】【的】【洞】【口】【。】【这】【些】【小】【家】【伙】【在】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【中】【成】【了】【我】【儿】【时】【的】【玩】【伴】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【继】【续】【向】【前】【走】【。】【“】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【”】【,】【邮】【递】【员】【叔】【叔】【的】【脚】【踏】【车】【轻】【快】【地】【叫】【着】【。】【看】【了】【看】【手】【表】【,】【原】【来】【已】【经】【到】【邮】【递】【员】【叔】【叔】【送】【晚】【报】【的】【时】【候】【。】【记】【得】【我】【以】【前】【总】【是】【喜】【欢】【站】【在】【他】【们】【身】【旁】【看】【着】【他】【们】【把】【报】【纸】【送】【到】【信】【箱】【里】【,】【等】【到】【他】【们】【塞】【到】【我】【家】【的】【信】【箱】【时】【,】【我】【便】【迫】【不】【及】【待】【地】【把】【它】【取】【出】【来】【。】【时】【间】【久】【了】【,】【他】【们】【看】【见】【我】【总】【是】【友】【好】【地】【说】【上】【两】【句】【,】【把】【我】【家】【的】【报】【纸】【直】【接】【递】【给】【我】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【”】【“】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【”】【“】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【”】【“】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【”】【,】【这】【些】【声】【音】【共】【同】【汇】【成】【最】【美】【的】【声】【音】【—】【—】【“】【故】【乡】【”】【的】【声】【音】【。】【现】【在】【的】【我】【已】【经】【不】【住】【在】【那】【里】【了】【,】【但】【打】【开】【窗】【户】【闭】【上】【眼】【睛】【用】【心】【倾】【听】【,】【儿】【时】【的】【一】【幕】【幕】【回】【忆】【便】【又】【会】【浮】【现】【在】【我】【的】【眼】【前】【,】【陪】【伴】【我】【度】【过】【独】【处】【的】【时】【刻】【,】【让】【我】【不】【会】【孤】【单】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【用】【心】【去】【倾】【听】【吧】【!】【我】【感】【到】【这】【世】【上】【的】【点】【点】【滴】【滴】【都】【是】【最】【美】【的】【声】【音】【!】【包】【括】【那】【远】【去】【的】【“】【故】【乡】【”】【的】【声】【音】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【点】【评】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【用】【心】【去】【感】【受】【生】【活】【,】【又】【用】【形】【象】【的】【语】【言】【把】【这】【种】【感】【受】【真】【切】【地】【表】【达】【出】【来】【,】【是】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【的】【动】【人】【之】【处】【。】【只】【有】【失】【去】【才】【懂】【得】【拥】【有】【的】【珍】【贵】【。】【绿】【树】【清】【风】【,】【老】【人】【叮】【嘱】【,】【蚂】【蚁】【搬】【家】【,】【邮】【差】【送】【报】【,】【这】【些】【都】【是】【日】【常】【生】【活】【景】【象】【,】【却】【浸】【润】【着】【邻】【里】【亲】【情】【,】【构】【建】【了】【作】【者】【幸】【福】【的】【童】【年】【生】【活】【。】【告】【别】【小】【区】【,】【告】【别】【邻】【里】【,】【也】【即】【告】【别】【童】【年】【,】【所】【以】【临】【别】【之】【际】【,】【作】【者】【才】【会】【如】【此】【依】【依】【不】【舍】【。】【珍】【惜】【之】【意】【,】【感】【恩】【之】【情】【,】【流】【溢】【于】【字】【里】【行】【间】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【以】【富】【有】【特】【色】【的】【声】【音】【“】【沙】【沙】【…】【…】【”】【“】【囡】【囡】【…】【…】【”】【“】【嘶】【嘶】【…】【…】【”】【“】【丁】【零】【…】【…】【”】【穿】【起】【一】【幕】【幕】【生】【活】【场】【景】【,】【选】【材】【恰】【当】【,】【结】【构】【清】【晰】【,】【用】【心】【之】【处】【,】【值】【得】【称】【许】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【用】【心】【去】【倾】【听】【吧】【!】【我】【感】【到】【这】【世】【上】【的】【点】【点】【滴】【滴】【都】【是】【最】【美】【的】【声】【音】【!】【包】【括】【那】【远】【去】【的】【‘】【故】【乡】【’】【的】【声】【音】【。】【”】【“】【倾】【听】【”】【是】【感】【受】【,】【“】【用】【心】【”】【是】【体】【验】【,】【“】【最】【美】【”】【是】【悟】【得】【。】【其】【中】【小】【小】【少】【年】【能】【做】【到】【“】【用】【心】【”】【,】【最】【为】【难】【得】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【(】【指】【导】【老】【师】【:】【郑】【重】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】

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